Is this poem any good, please be honest?
She dances through the trees
twirling over the ground
like leaves blowing in the wind
twisting in the dawn.
Every now and then
I catch a flash of green
her dress
as she flits around
like a fairy
with the rosy golden glow of the sunrise
illuminating her smiling face.
A warm wind blows
and her hair ripples
like birds feathers
gently shaking
in the summer morning.
She laughs
filling the still morning air with bells
then disappears
behind the camouflage
of a thousand trees.
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I like for what my opinion is worth..
very descriptive and sweet.
yepppers!
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It is very discriptive and I like the sort of story it almost tells, but I have never been one for poems without rhyming stanzas.
i thought it was lovely!! felt like i was the girl with the wind blowing my hair! well done like it
pls read mine http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=ArtiuLi_dhaMp_RBVA5IISfsy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20081101132202AAfa0wh
i think is bad couse a poem shouldnt be that long to explain its meaning
A clear and beautiful picture of a child enjoying her surroundings while her mother watches. I’d say this is excellent and give you a star!
it is so descriptive that when i started reading it i could see all that was happening right in front of me, this is a very good imagery poem and i love the use of words, you also have all 5 sense’s in your poem and that is good to have in a imagery poem…Bravo you should do this for a job!!!!!