Is this poem any good, please be honest?
Tuesday, March 2nd, 2010 at
4:26 am
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I like for what my opinion is worth..
very descriptive and sweet.
yepppers!
help meh
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AmG6HwZIHfuAqcKJ8pTmYCbsy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20081101140447AAgPM3g
It is very discriptive and I like the sort of story it almost tells, but I have never been one for poems without rhyming stanzas.
i thought it was lovely!! felt like i was the girl with the wind blowing my hair! well done like it
pls read mine http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=ArtiuLi_dhaMp_RBVA5IISfsy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20081101132202AAfa0wh
i think is bad couse a poem shouldnt be that long to explain its meaning
A clear and beautiful picture of a child enjoying her surroundings while her mother watches. I’d say this is excellent and give you a star!
it is so descriptive that when i started reading it i could see all that was happening right in front of me, this is a very good imagery poem and i love the use of words, you also have all 5 sense’s in your poem and that is good to have in a imagery poem…Bravo you should do this for a job!!!!!