read my poem!! please:] tell me what you think?

With eyes but closed she watched in wonder.
For everywhere they seemed to be…
Like a daze in a storm; its’ lightning came thunder.

There were diamonds in the stream,
the wings upon the trees, and fairies it does seem?
Now laughter echoed through the time, cheer swayed from side to side…
Could all the wind and all the air have fused to wind chimes…?

However, sudden and quick: only I could be discovered.

Slowly, step by step I could be heard…
kneading the earth and the leaves.
“How could all the joy leave without one parting word?”
Then sudden and quick, like tattered glass,
I fell and shattered…

Now the streams are my tears, the leaves my scattered pieces.
I am here forever and left to grieve.
For however magical one day might seem
Remember, it was all but a dream.

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