read my poem!! please:] tell me what you think?
Thursday, January 7th, 2010 at
8:07 am
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wow you really ruined this with your rhyming, the poem is just random and doesnt make sense. like "the wings upon the trees, and fairies it does seem," its awkward because you were trying to rhyme it. i would try agian.
im not much of a poem reader or writer but this is good to me! i like it ! i really like the ending
its really good. i like it
thats amazing and soooo beautiful. I love it!
WOW.
it is great…fantastic…amazing…..
that’s pretty good