What do you think of thi plot line for a preteen-teen book,
Ok so there is this girl whos father told her from the age of 2 that she is to be called Cassie Anne, (no nick names or anything). And "Cassie" (whos real name is Isabel DiaGuaridie) obeys and the family goes into hiding as the Petersons.
Cassie never makes any friends and one day, her first day at her grade school in kindergarten, a couple girls make fun of her teacher Ms. Clearly helps her.
With that the two of them become the best of friends and its the only friend Cassie ever makes.
But one day three years later when shes in third grade Ms. Clearly moves.
When Cassie goes into 4th grade she tries to make friends (dosen’t)
5th grade (dosen’t)
Until the very last day of fifthe grade.
The last day Cassie’s teacher gets a call in the middle of class and calls Cassie out into the hall and takes her into a strange hallway and starts running until she hears someone following them in the dark hallway, she tells Cassie to run a certain deriction and that there is a limo and a jet waiting for her.
When she gets to the jet her parents are there, crying.
When the are on the jet and in the sky Cassie spills peanuts then goes to get something to sweep them up with.
When she gets back the peanuts are picked up and put into a small crystal bowl…who did it?
Then she sees the girl in the shadows and her name is Catalina Harrington (Cate)
Cate says that her Aunt is Ms. Clearly and when her parents died she was sent to live with her.
She says that she has been in spy training all of her life but her parents died and Ms. Clearly can’t train her because she is not a spy.
Ms. Clearly told her to come look for Cassie Anne Petersons dad becuz he is a spy and can train her properly.
She tells her whole story and Cassie finds out that Cate knows her real name (Isabel)
Cassie thinks her dad works in a law firm but later finds out he works for the CIA
Then when the two are asking her father if her can finish training Cate there is a loud crash and the lights go out, her dad disapears and so does Cassie’s mom.
The two girls try to put that plane on auto pilot and succed and then go hide in the planes bathroom, (which is locked at first but Cate kicks open)
When there in there Henry comes, Henry is a young boy who is the son of Samuel Harris, an enemy spy that killed Cates parents.
He wants the Rock of Yullow, which is the rock in which is something if held by a spy can give great powers and wealth and dictarorship.
Cassie has it- becuz her dad brough it back from a "business trip" mission.- the mission in which Cates parents were killed.
The plane lands in Italy…
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