Tuesday, September 14th, 2010 at
8:40 pm
I made an OC that I’m beginning to think sounds a bit Mary-Sueish. I DON’T want that. I hate Mary Sues with a passion!*
Anyway, its a Naruto OC, and I already asked about it but thought I should go a bit more in depth. (I got cut off last time)
Name: Kaori Ogawa
Age: 18-21
Rank: Missing Nin
Personality: Reserved, expressionless and sensible/apathetic
Anyway, here’s what she can do:
~ Regenerate parts of her body that have been chopped off (BUT she can die. CAN DIE. Her head and heart must be intact or else she will die. She’s NOT immmortal like Hidan).
~Has accelerated healing abilities
~Can shoot her fingernails like darts, as well as use them like knives. They harden and are great for cutting and slashing, and are hard as diamonds.
So, that’s it. She can’t sprout flowers or come back from the dead. Yeah. Tell me if its too Mary Sue and I’ll be grateful.^-^
*Mary Sues are Ocs created by people who can beat everyone, is loved by all guys/girls + pwns all.
I think I’m going to take away the ability to regenerate body parts/limbs. That is way too Mary-ish.
I’m also gonna reveal that she does in fact show emotion, but is mostly serious and likes to get things down, and has patience (though bad temper). She is
NOT EMO. The world doesn’t need another Sasuke.
Also, her weakness is that though she can heal quickly, the time it takes depends on the wound. A deep gash in her side means she’d better hurry up and heal or she’s a goner!
Also, she may be agile, but she isn’t very strong. Her speed is what keeps her alive.
Now that I’ve made some changes, let’s see.