i tried to work out all the kinks and remember just because im 14 doesn’t mean u shouldn’t judge me harshly i appreciate your help but don’t bash twilight just tell me every little mistake or suggestion you have for me
chapter 1 bday
finally, "its my birthday" i screamed the second i woke up. I was frivolously jumping on my bed over enthusiastic for this day, it seems as if i waited a millennium for it day though i was just born 7 years ago. But i had the body of a 17 year old and the mind of one too.
After 3 jumps i heard a sharp crack "uh oh" i said. i knew Esme wasn’t going to be happy about this, Its the 3rd bed i broke this month and its an antique too. It was beautiful Esme went through a lot of trouble to refurnish my room every month due to my quick growing , and i of course carelessly forget what i am capable of. But hey I’m only human well that’s not entirely true just only half human.
3 seconds later Alice, Rosalie, Esme, and Bella were by my side and they formed a circle around my bed and almost sang in their beautiful harmonic voices "happy birthday". I looked at Esme apologetic for what i did to the bed, she instantly understood and said "ill let this one slide Renesmee after all its your birthday and you’ve given me a new hobby furnishing your room". we all laughed in synchronization
I stood up and hugged every single one of them Bella, Esme, Rosalie, and Alice.
Alice froze for a short moment it took me less then a second to realize she was seeing something. After that she was all smiles "Alice" i said eager to ruin her surprise, she knew what i was up to and she wasn’t happy about it. "well at least you know that your no longer surprise birthday party for me will be one of the best days of my life" i said, emphasizing the last word. I felt a little guilty for ruining her fun i had to re compensate in some way. "how did you know?" she said whining and even whining her voice was still beautiful like a melody so graceful and beautiful like most vampires are. "well it gets easier after living so may years with you well 7 technically but still" i trailed off.
They all looked at me eagerly i felt as if i was their experiment and the experimentation was about to begin. Rosalie almost shouted "you cant believe the outfit i made for you with Alice its beautiful you have to wear it today!" "yes Nessie you absolutely have to" Alice said in agreement. "she doesn’t have to do anything"said my mother Bella (short for Isabella) "unless she wants to" she continued after her short pause
Bella hated birthdays in her human life she doesn’t want to pressure me in that way at all but i knew she was hoping i would go along. "i am going to refurnish your room again, you cant go inside of it for the whole day its a surprise and you can only see the results after your party" said Esme."well i have to get dressed you know ha ha" i laughed and contradicted her.I enjoyed being right most of the time unless i was hurting someone but i knew Esme agreed with me and wasn’t hurt by this at all. " well you are right but after you are done getting dressed you cant set one foot in it" said Esme "darn!and i wanted a little sneak peek of it but oh well you never fail to surprise me Esme i know it will be beautiful though" i said smiling.
"come on" Alice said tugging on my arm "we have a lot of work to do the guests are arriving soon!". "guests"? i shouted "uh oh" Alice said "you didn’t know well now the surprise is all ruined i thought you knew" i laughed at her angry face its not really something to get worked up about "well now you have to tell me who’s coming or i refuse to get ready". Rosalie cut in the conversation and she said "well Nessie you don’t really have a choice 2 against one who do you honestly think will win?" i heard triumph in her voice "Bella and Edward will help me you know how it is with Bella and birthdays and after all Edward is my dad so 3 against 2 who do you think will win?" i emphasized victory in my voice. "fine" they both groaned in synchronization "lets get ready first we don’t have much time"
We blazed down the stairs and started decorating the house, we wrapped all the trees and practically the whole house in bright colorful lights and beautiful ribbons. The atmosphere was so peaceful and beautiful around us. Alice filled all the glistening crystal bowls with flowers they were freesia and multicolored roses i suppose, The smell was sweet and lovely. And i made dinner and bought cake i bought Jacob’s favorite and 4 other cakes just in case Seth and Leah prefer something else. i bought fruit cake, chocolate cake, cheesecake, vanilla and strawberry. The rest of my family of course couldn’t eat the cake, i could but i preferred blood . Though the cakes gave a happy birthday atmosphere around us. The werewolves wouldn’t have a hard time finishing those up.
I wondered if i should get something more for him. My thoughts were suddenly interrupted by Alice shouting
My thoughts were suddenly interrupted by Alice shouting into my ears " go get dressed the guests are almost here hurry before the boys come back from hunting!". I ran to my room and found lying there at the edge of my bed the most gorgeous dress i have ever seen. And i have seen many beautiful dresses in my lifetime. It was a flowy short dress, i preferred those more since its easier to move around in them. And the color was abseloutely beautiful a color only vampire eyes would see correctly human eyes could not precept the full beauty of it. It was almost a viridian a cross between cyan blue and turquoise with something much more i couldn’t quite put my finger on it. It was made of the finest silk and chiffone i could smell the quality of the fabric. It was strapless very delicate, it actually had real diamonds, emeralds, and pearls embedded in it trailing down smoothly from the top in the shape of a flowy triangle. One diamond at the top two under it and three emeralds under
and three emeralds under those and 4 pearls under the emerald and so on increasing to hug my whole torso in these beautiful stones and waist down it was more subtle but definitely not plain it sparkled just as almost a i did in the sunlight
I ran and i hugged Rosalie and Alice, and said "oh my god thank you guys so much its so beautiful and i sincerely thank you this isn’t just an ordinary dress i know it came form the heart". Alice and Rosalie embraced me back and Alice said "yup i knew this was going to happen that’s why i rushed you to your room you don’t think ill give you a dress if i know you are going to hate it " and Rosalie replied "yes i had to let Alice help me this time and it truly did come from my heart i love you very much renesmee even before you were born". I smiled a huge smile and kicked them out of my room so i can get dressed. I wondered what esme was planning to change in here.
After i was done i could hear about a mile away the sound of four people running toward this area i knew it was jasper, Edward, Emmet, and carlisle. I went down stairs ready to greet them and ready for them to shower me with happy birthdays and hugs. As soon as i was downstairs carlise hugged me and said "happy birthday my favorite granddaughter" i laughed and said " I’m your only granddaughter" and he replied " yes that’s true but i couldn’t ask for a better one" i was so touched by his words, i remembered i had to reply and i said truly from my heart "and i couldn’t ask for a better grandfather either carlisle". It didnt feel right calling him my grandfather his body was in its 20′s but it was that kind of respect he deserved.
Now it was Emmet’s turn he gave me a big bear hug and picked me up and shouted "happy birthday" i said "thanks uncle Emmet". I was used to calling him uncle since i was young i always felt he was much bigger than me than the rest of my family ". He said you don’t have to call me that anymore your 17 now" i smiled and said "yes but i want to plus i know it makes you feel bigger than you are so why not ha ha" he put me down and smiled and let jasper have his turn.
Jasper didn’t have to change my mood i was already very happy and he could sense that. He hugged me and said "happy 7th or 17th birthday renesmee whichever you prefer" i laughed at his joke and he walked by me not saying much. I knew jasper loved me though he wasn’t quite a talkative person. He kept his feelings inside of him which was sort of ironic considering his ability to sense and change the emotions of everyone around him.
Finally Edward my father came to me with a huge grin on his face and hugged me very tightly he said " i hope you have a very happy birthday my daughter is all grown up now and you are very beautiful and smart and the perfect daughter i am so lucky to have you, you and Bella the 2 most special ladies in my life". I smiled and i teared i was the only one in my family who was able to do that being half human and all. I got the best of traits from each species "daddy" i said. I haven’t called him that in so long but i felt so young and so little and happy with him again i was very happy my father was pleased with me and i know he knew i loved him also. "i hugged him tight and said "i love you too and you know from reading my mind that i too couldn’t ask for a better father i am so so happy you are pleased with me". Alice came down and said "okay okay enough of all the love here I’m very happy that you guys are happy but the party starts in 10 minutes and everyone is coming right now"