What do you think of this poem?
Saturday, March 6th, 2010 at
3:18 pm
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All in all it is good. However speaking honestly I find the first half better written than the second. In my view you have lost that perfect rhythm you had achieved.
Take another peek at it maybe you will see what I mean.
Awesome.
Awesome.